[Earth][ Vol.1] 众神凋零 Shall-We-Cry

虹色青青

国货来说挺好的

我个人十分喜欢这个作品的

如果说不正常的小说看多了。看这个很调济了。。

个人支持下

jaming

原帖由 axel1007 于 2008-1-15 17:20 发表

好可怕。。居然把评语都放上了。。。

不好意思，你敢评我敢放……
谁叫某人“调教”当道啊~

话说日式轻小说蛮多小于7w字一本的~只是一般没有人会注意字数。

e987a654

感谢让我看到一片好的轻小说

qian92

是新书吗？我也期待一下吧！

kmanbb

发现这版块的这篇小说和原创区的那篇在章节上有所出入（章目和标题都是）
还有，第一张贴那里的下载链接居然是“Access Denied” ，请LZ修复一下……

弦月凝空

怎么看到某评审的意见里都是调教呢

8918120

未看過呢,感覺還幾恐怖

Daisuka

不错的小说,设定是中世纪?
才看了一小半感觉可以,谢谢LZ了

Crist

POWERFUL (to a certain extent)
Definately needs cgs to accompany this type of work (almost completely lacking in descriptions)
And for Greek tradgedies, imo it's God, Hero, Tragic Flaws (Fate as the absolute result of the hero's tragic flaws)
The pace can also be improved (very busy and hasted) by adding descriptions (two birds with one stone)
Lastly, I wish the protagonist answered the heroine this way: "If the sins you bear will abhore all humanity, then I for one will pardon you as a human, and remind you that to me, what you bear is a part of you that I shall treasure as all other, every day while we exist."

and...
personal rant here:
Can someone abadon morality as something that all human have? Can someone write a protagonist that's apathetic to an extreme, cynical to an extreme, suspicious to an extreme and selfish to an extreme?

ps. What's with the significance of the titile? The first part means "the fall of gods (till none left)", while the second part "shall-we-cry"... is that an excerpt? I'm not getting any connections there.

[ 本帖最后由 Crist 于 2008-3-5 18:44 编辑 ]

vxcw

被题目吸引进来看看，感谢楼主的分享

zpx1986

看完了感觉不错,就是进度快了点.....

den5531

不錯看阿!!!!!

但希望劇情部份能加強連貫性

cpaig

是不错的文章,话说这个小说世界不断变,一会过去,一会未来,

robinarc

确实是相当不错的作品
开头的分数很强

4810404

新书吗  小弟特地来支持下  感谢楼主的翻译  支持